Saturday, September 8, 2012

First man to walk on the moon dead! 1930-2012 Neil Armstrong

Neil Armstrong as the first man to set foot on the moon. He traveled with the Apollo 11 mission. He set foot on the moon January 20, 1969. Neil was a man that was looked up and was amazed. The CW33 news wrote the article. The article is written in third person. I really did not know much about Neil other than the fact about being the first man to walk on the moon. I found out about his death yesterday while watching the CW33 news. I think the article has both a positive and negative influence on the audience. The reason why the article was written was because Neil Armstrong was a very popular idol in the United States. The main idea is to spread the news about Neil's death.
http://www.the33tv.com/news/la-me-neil-armstrong-20120826,0,4281491.story
By: Ruby Aguilar

6 comments:

  1. This is such a tragic event. The first man on the moon has now taken his last breath. Neil Armstrong will always be remembered, and he will be honored for expanding our knowledge in science.

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  2. He seemed to have lived a long and enjoyable life. Even though he died here, I believe that he will never be forgotten.

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  3. Neil Armstrong is an American hero. He will be forever remembered for his famous quote when he first stepped on the moon and his contributions to our knowledge about space and science. He had a long life.

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  4. Neil Armstrong was truly a role model for us Americans. He was courageous, and he never doubted the impossible. His first step on the moon, caused many of our questions about space to be answered. He will never be forgotten, and his legacy will always live on.

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  5. Man, this is pretty sad. This man accomplished something others did not think was possible! Go Armstrong! Rest in peace...

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  6. I feel like this amazing man's death is bittersweet: of course it is sad that we've lost this American astronaut's life, but those who remembered that famous moon landing will be sure to pass it on to the next generations. He will live on in our memories, and he will always be a symbol for patriotism, hard work, and the belief that anything is possible.

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